这个...谢谢你的积极参与哈.其实,有一点小错误吧...要么我稍微帮你改一下?by the way,I'm impressed by your words...
Yesterday I saw a piece of short writing for me , it(was) my friend wrote(这个词去掉好了) . I was crying when I reading(read) it . And I have much thought(s) and feelings .
I think I am a very happy girl in everyone's eyes all the way . But I am not , I am a extreme , obstinate and weak girl in fact . I thought know this only myself (这句话稍微改下I thought only myself knew this.). But now , I know I am not (the) only one , I have some best friends .
My friend told me :" I wish to(to去掉拉) you are happy !"
Yes , I am happy ,my life is (加个full of)happiness !
Friends , you are my best friends for ever . I wish you (happy?).
这个,我个人的一些意见,参考一下咯

my so very handsome Jonny Depp, the most sexy man in the world!...
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